The students will write a persuasive essay to sum up the activities of this unit and to become advocates of philanthropy and of preserving and protecting the Earth. This essay may be published in the local or school newspaper or entered into a writing contest.
Two One-Hour Class Periods
The learner will:
- summarize the philanthropic experience in an essay.
- convince the audience of the importance of giving of one's time, talents, and treasures for the sake of the common good.
- give examples to support ideas and convince the reader of his or her responsibility to preserve and protect the environment (advocacy).
Persuasive Essay Rubric (Attachment One)
Anticipatory Set:
Say, "Okay, class. We acted as what at the beach? (philanthropists) What did we do? How did you feel when it was all cleaned up? What did it look like? Why did we do it? What did we find? How does that make you feel? Now what? It's time to go a step further. You will become advocates for philanthropy and for preserving and protecting our environment. Why should others do the same or similar things?"
- The introductory paragraph should state your opinion clearly. Be sure to include a definition of philanthropy and tie it in to the International Coastal Cleanup. (This essay usually includes a statement like, "I believe…" or "I feel…")
- The next three paragraphs should give specific examples from our International Coastal Cleanup, "We Are Plooters," and/or Just a Dream to support your opinion. This could include items found, how the beach looked when you arrived, dangerous items to people and/or wildlife, how you felt, how this environment should look, how and why we organized to meet a need, identify outcomes, and explain how other content areas were used as well.
- The closing paragraph should clearly restate your position on this opinion and try to convince the reader to act or believe accordingly.
- Core Democratic Values could be included as well.
This persuasive essay is the assessment for the entire unit. It should be evaluated according to how well the student shows an understanding of philanthropy and gives examples from the International Coastal Cleanup and/or pieces of literature that were used. (You may choose to evaluate them on English mechanics as well.)
Distribute Persuasive Essay Rubric (see Attachment One). Ask parents to edit the students' rough copies of their essays using the criteria provided.
These essays may be submitted to the local or school paper or entered into a writing contest.
Lesson Developed and Piloted by:
Kathleen VeenstraSample of Scoring Rubric for Persuasive Writing
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Points |
Description |
| 4 | The paper meets all criteria and has few mechanics and usage errors. It has a strong organizational pattern. Each reason is well supported with facts and details. The introduction and conclusion are strong. |
| 3 | The goal is clear. Good reasons are given and supported with facts, and there is an introduction and a conclusion. This paper may have usage or mechanics errors that affect comprehension. |
| 2 | The paper states a goal and reasons that support it. Some reasons are well developed, but the argument is weak. There is no effective conclusion. |
| 1 | This paper does not attempt to persuade, or it meets the criteria only minimally. Only one reason is given with little or no support. |
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Comments
(The positive aspect of using this lesson was) giving students the opportunity to express in writing what they feel and know about being a philanthropist.
(The positive aspect of using this lesson was) writing as an advocate. (The lesson) Helped students see how their actions were important.