Lesson 2: Trash or Treasure?
Handout 8

Final Evaluation for "Reacting To Trevor's Idea" Essay

Learner _______________________________

1. Turned in Rough Draft and Evaluation Sheets (10 points) Points

a. Rough Draft (3 points) ___________

b. Self Evaluation (3 points) ___________

c. Peer Evaluation (4 points) ___________

2. Strong Introductory Paragraph (10 points) Points

a. Hook (4 points) ___________

b. Thesis Statement (4 points) ___________

c. Transition Statement (2 points) ___________

3. Body Paragraph #1 (10 points) Points

a. Catchy Topic Sentence (2 ½ points) ___________

b. Strong Supporting Details (5 points) ___________

c. Catchy Concluding Sentence (2 ½ points) ___________

4. Body Paragraph #2 (10 points) Points

a. Catchy Topic sentence (2 ½ points) __________

b. Strong Supporting Details (5 points) ___________

c. Catchy Concluding Sentence (2 ½ points) ___________

5. Body Paragraph #3 (10 points) Points

a. Catchy Topic Sentence (2 ½ points) __________

b. Strong Supporting Details (5 points) ___________

c. Catchy Concluding Sentence (2 ½ points) ___________

6. Concluding Paragraph (10 points) Points

a. Restate Hook (4 points) ___________

b. Restate Thesis Statement (4 points) ___________

c. Strong Concluding Thought (2 points) ___________

7. Strong Grammar (5 points) Points

a. Variety in Sentence Structure with Simple/Compound Sentences (2 points) ___________

b. Written in Complete Paragraphs (1 point) ___________

c. Correct Punctuation (1 point) ___________

d. No Fragments/Run-ons (1 point) ___________

 

Your Score____________________/65 points

Comments:

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