9th-12th Grade
Subjects:
Language Arts, Library / Technology, Philanthropy and Social Studies
Key Words/Concepts click to view
| ELA: | Persuasive Techniques; Research; Writing Mechanics; Writing Process |
| PHIL: | Advocacy; Common Good; Courage; Sacrifice |
| SOC: | Cause/Effect; Core Democratic Values; LEAGUE Optional Lesson: One Day; Peer Review; Research |
Purpose:
Students will demonstrate the importance that public advocacy for the common good has in developing civic virtue and core democratic values by successfully writing a research- based persuasive essay.
Duration:
Three Fifty-Five Minute Class Periods
Objectives:
The learners will:
- develop, in writing, the definition of heroes and public advocacy from Lesson One: What Is a Hero?
- identify advocacy and philanthropy in context of societal norms in text and media.
- define the aspects of advocacy by breaking it down to its components.
- research and support an opinion with factual evidence.
- compose a persuasive essay demonstrating the elements of grammar, usage, content in subject and philanthropy.
Materials:
Instructor Note: The instructor will collect quotes regarding unconventional ideas of courage. Texts and/or media, discussing controversial/unconventional heroes for these quotes, may be found in the Bibliographical References.
- Journal which was begun in Lesson One and continued in Lesson Two
- Computer Lab and/or library time to research.
- Attachment One: Persuasive Essay Framework
- Attachment Two: Writing In Progress
- Attachment Three: Rubric for the Persuasive Essay
- Handout 1
- Writing Persuasive Essays
- Handout 2
- Writing In Progress
- Handout 3
- Rubric For Assessing the Persuasive Essay
Instructional Procedure(s):
Day One:
Anticipatory Set:
Put the following quote on the board or provide the students with the quotes you have gathered and have them select two for reflection writing.
Assessment:
Attachment Two, daily writing progress, class participation, teacher observation, Persuasive Essay Rubric (Attachment Three)
Extension:
- Students write a letter to an advocacy organization in support of their efforts.
- Have the students collect visual/audio representations of courage and present them to the class—what does courage look/sound like? Why did you choose what you chose?
- Have students write brief improvisational scenes where they display alternative forms of courage.
Bibliographical References:
- Levine, Ellen. Freedom’s Children. New York: An Avon Flare Book, 1993. ISBN: 0606058354
Thirty African Americans who were teens in the 1950s and 1960s give oral histories of their involvement in the struggle for civil rights. All of the stories are true. ~ ALA Booklist Editor’s Choice ~ School Library Journal Best Book of the Year.
- Lewis, Barbara A. Kids with Courage: True Stories about Young People Making a Difference. MN: Free Spirit Publishing, 1992. ISBN: 0915793393
Biographies of young people who are making their communities a better place by the work that they do to help others and themselves.
- Davenport, May. Courage: An Anthology of Short Stories, Articles and Poems. May Davenport Publishing, 1979. ISBN: 0960311831. An excellent resource!
- Various Artists. America: A Tribute to Heroes. Interscope Records, 2001.
CD commemorating September 11th. Artists as varied as Bruce Springsteen, Limp Bizkit, Stevie Wonder and Faith Hill.
- Longman, Jere. Among the Heroes: United Flight 93 and the Passengers and Crew Who Fought Back. HarperCollins, First ed., July 30, 2002. ISBN: 0060099089
Lesson Developed and Piloted by:
Michelle Strang
Muskegon Public Schools
Muskegon High School
Muskegon, MI 49441
Handouts:
Writing Persuasive Essays
They could do it because they believed they could.
Vergil
70 - 19 B.C. Roman
In persuasive writing, we try to convince others to agree with our facts, share our values, accept our argument and conclusions, and adopt our way of thinking.
Elements toward building a good persuasive essay include
- establishing facts
to support an argument
- clarifying relevant values
for your audience (perspective)
- prioritizing, editing, and/or sequencing
the facts and values in importance to build the argument
- forming and stating conclusions
- “persuading” your audience that your conclusions
are based upon the agreed-upon facts and shared values
- having the confidence
to communicate your “persuasion” in writing
Here are some strategies to complete a persuasive writing assignment:
Write out the questions in your own words.
- Think of the questions posed in the assignment
while you are reading and researching. Determine
- facts
- the source of the facts for reliability and later reference
- source of the facts for prejudice
- values that color the facts or the issue
- what you think of the author's argument
- List out facts ; consider their importance:
prioritize, edit, sequence, discard, etc.
Ask yourself “What's missing?”
- What are the “hot buttons” of the issue?
List possible emotions/emotional reactions and recognize them for later use.
Start writing a draft!
Start as close as possible to your reading/research. Do not concern yourself with grammar or spelling at this point. You will correct for grammar and spelling later.
- Write your first paragraph
- Introduce the topic
- Inform the reader of your point of view!
- Entice the reader to continue with the rest of the paper!
- Focus on three main points to develop
- Establish flow from paragraph to paragraph
- Keep your voice active
- Quote sources to establish authority
- Stay focused on your point of view throughout the essay
- Focus on logical arguments
- Don't lapse into summary
in the development--wait for the conclusion
- Conclusion
- Summarize, then conclude, your argument
- Refer to the first paragraph/opening statement as well as the main points
- Does the conclusion restate the main ideas?
- Reflect the succession and importance of the arguments
- Logically conclude their development
- Edit/rewrite the first paragraph
to better telegraph your development and conclusion.
- Re-read your paper
with a fresh mind and a sharp pencil
• Ask yourself:
Does this make sense? Am I convinced?
- Will this convince a reader?
Will they understand my values, and agree with my facts?
- Edit, correct, and re-write as necessary
- Check spelling and grammar!
- Have a friend read it and respond to your argument.
Were they convinced?
- Revise if necessary
- Turn in the paper
- Celebrate a job well done,
with the confidence that you have done your best.
How to respond to criticism:
Consider criticism as a test of developing your powers of persuasion.
Try not to take it personally.
If your facts are criticized , double check them, and then cite your sources.
If your values are criticized , sometimes we need to agree, “to disagree." Remember: your success in persuading others assumes that the other person is open to being persuaded!
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Writing In Progress
Name ___________________________________
Edit Partner or Writing Pod Members
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
Topic for persuasive essay
I am going to use the following for my research. (Note: use proper bibliographic citing.)
I completed the following part(s) of my essay today.
My tasks for work at home and in class for tomorrow are:
My evaluation of my progress so far is:
My peer editor has made the following suggestion(s)
Rubric For Assessing the Persuasive Essay
| Four Points |
Introduces topic, informs, provides three examples as evidence, has excellent flow , establishes facts with documentation, clarifies relevant values and issues, prioritizes the argument for advocacy, demonstrates editing, stated conclusions , grammatical structure, style demonstrated at a minimum of 90% accuracy, elements of public advocacy clearly demonstrated in essay, a minimum of two research resources used, work properly cited, bibliography correct to style sheet. The essay persuades and is convincing in support of advocacy. |
Attachment Two submitted for each class session, works with peer editor consistently, evidence of peer editing observed by instructor, essay submitted on time, writer volunteered for presentation discussion. Timelines met |
| Three Points |
Introduces the topic and connects it to advocacy, give two facts and supportive detail, editing is evident, a minimum of two resources used, bibliography provided, style consistent with template. Grammar and structure within 75% accuracy. |
Attachment Two showing daily progress is submitted for two days, peer cooperation demonstrated, writer contributed to class presentation. Timelines met |
| Two Points |
A persuasive essay is submitted. The topic is stated but only one source is used, advocacy addressed, bibliography included but not aligned to style form. There was an attempt at editing. 60% accuracy in writing conventions and grammar. |
An attempt to complete Attachment Two is made. Peer editing is inconsistent. Essay submitted. Some timelines not met. Writer participates in discussion. |
| One Point |
An attempt at writing a persuasive essay is made. Research is not documented, bibliography not provided, elements of style and grammar are less than 50%. |
Peer editing is attempted. No evidence of Attachment Two is present, essay is submitted but timelines are not met. Student has minimal class participation |
| No Points |
No attempt is made and essay not submitted. |
There was no cooperation with the peer editor. | |